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I am JamestheFreak King of the Freaks you entered my World of Madness so you might as well see some things i put in my World and one last thing... ZARGH!!! *fires laser*

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History of the ancient Freaks

Posted 11-18-2008 at 07:23 PM by JamestheFreak
long ago thousands of years ago the Freaks have lived in simple villages and small towns they were a powerful race of warriors but were neither good or evil they were neutral as they had no care in the world if no one bothers them they will leave everyone alone but if anything happens they will fight back and they had an alliance with the norms for awhile and usually spent some time with them also the King of Freaks was very loyal to his kingdom as he did his best to keep the freaks safe from harm his name was Domenic Crunch and everyone looked up to him as their mighty leader and also Domenic's most loyal servant Repivkrad who served him no matter what and has predicted a future where a new king will be born thousands of years later and had been put to eternal sleep until the new king was born as Domenic thought this prediction may foreshadow something bad so he had some worries and was right as a war broke out when Domenic heard of murder of his son by the norms and for ten years they fought it was a stalemate for these ten long bloody years as freaks and norms equally matched until one day they had a new weapon that will nearly kill all freaks the norms started by experimenting this new source on captured freak soldiers and citizens torturing them in different ways like putting them in swords, daggers, and bow and arrows and even just exposing the source which causes them to die painfully turning to dust and they got an unlimited supply in the world their Norms God created long ago for them and then they named this stuff Anti Freak and after that they planned to uses one big explosion to kill all freaks and a freak spy heard this news and warned Domenic... and then the Freak God heard too and then created a new world where no one can get to and opened the portal but he didn't make it in time the norms were about to attack but the king.. had a plan he commanded all freaks to head to the portal as he will sacrifice himself to save everyone as the norms got ready for the big Anti Freak explosion the Freaks were running into the portal and then the norms fired it... Domenic was only left and Repivkrad who was in a secret spot as anti freak wont affect him he shall stay asleep and unharmed then as the explosion was coming Domenic used all the power he had and created a shield holding off the explosion then we has left a note for Repivkrad which used a spell for Repivkrad to know what to do and his instructions were as written
"when you wake up.. the new king will be born.. you must find him and tell him of what he was born to do take the the traitors and bring back the freak kingdom as the new king of freaks"
and after all the freaks managed to escape Domenic finally let the explosion do its work just only killing him leaving him to become dust and the Norms thought they killed everyone so they celebrated for the win of killing all freaks and then thousands of years as passed of no freaks until the new king was born so you all know what happened after that

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Jackitkong's Avatar
Huff huff.... really it's not that bad. But I think I've discovered what makes it seem so long.... periods. As obvious as this may seem, periods and commas are a must when your typing. This is so people's mind actually know when to break for a second.. Honestly I just know this thing would be so much easier to read with periods in the proper spot.....
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Posted 11-18-2008 at 08:01 PM by Jackitkong Jackitkong is online now
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this isnt my english class jeez well w/e
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Posted 11-18-2008 at 09:16 PM by JamestheFreak JamestheFreak is offline
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well he has a point....i keep getting lost in this thing @_@
lol i'll try again after school =P
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Posted 11-19-2008 at 04:20 AM by Bakuri Bakuri is offline
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jeez!!!
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Posted 11-19-2008 at 07:42 AM by JamestheFreak JamestheFreak is offline
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Bakuri's Avatar
read it! and amazingly i didnt get lost lol
'twas interesting...a very good king indeed *nod nod*

you haz writing potential....but it is wasted without proper grammer -.-' 'tis difficult to read, my friend
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Posted 11-19-2008 at 01:46 PM by Bakuri Bakuri is offline
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lol well this aint school so why bother
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Posted 11-19-2008 at 03:29 PM by JamestheFreak JamestheFreak is offline
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So People Can Read It.
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Posted 11-25-2008 at 09:34 PM by Garrett Garrett is offline
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shut up -.-
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Posted 12-18-2008 at 07:38 PM by JamestheFreak JamestheFreak is offline
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Brownie's Avatar
ik right i couldnt read it at firs. This isnt school ik but you need to use school skills or it will end up like this know what im sayin i bet you do where do i stop ok good bye
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Posted 06-12-2009 at 08:34 AM by Brownie Brownie is offline
 
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