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Johns' Legacy:Part 1, The Truth
Posted 12-07-2008 at 07:48 PM by MarioMan01
I, John had never been more nervous in my life!I had to take the biggest test in the history of tests and if I failed I would have to stay back in 6th grade.
"I can't fail this test or else i'm gonna have to do sixth grade all over again!"I exclaimed
"Calm down, you are NOT gonna fail this test"My best friend, Blaise Retorted.
Ok, so I really shouldn't have been freaking out about this test but if you were me you'd be freaking out since I never study!This test was making me have a nervous breakdown.
"Well i'm going home, Blaise.I got to..."I took a big gulp and said it"Study."
I ran home as fast as I could.I tripped on a rock and got sprayed by sprinklers, No thanks to the nervous breakdown because of the test.I opened my door, wet, and bruised on my left arm
"Ah, what happened to you son?"My mother said worried.
"Nothing, mom.I was just in a hurry to do something"I responded.
I opened the door to my room and quickly closed it.I got out a piece of paper from my backpack and started studying.A few hours later I took a shower and went to sleep
The next day, my head started to hurt massively, I thought it was because I studied since I never really did.I went to eat breakfast near my mom when I heard a voice, exactly like my mom's saying"Maybe I should tell him, now"
I looked around and said to my mom
"Did you say something mom, cause I think I heard your voice."
"No, I only thought something"My mom said
"Wait?!Are you saying I read your mind?"
"Yes and I think I should tell you the truth about our family"
I was getting a bit worried, I don't know why tough.I just listened to my mom saying lots of things about our family and how they had powers and each of their son or daughter had powers.My mom also said we have telekinesis and I was very intrigued by all of this.
So the test was today and I walked to school, very calm and mellow.Blaise walked up to me and said
"Well, well I thought you'd come to school really nervous or not come to school at all cause of the test!"
"Don't worry Blaise, I got it all under control"I said with a smirk on my face.
"I can't fail this test or else i'm gonna have to do sixth grade all over again!"I exclaimed
"Calm down, you are NOT gonna fail this test"My best friend, Blaise Retorted.
Ok, so I really shouldn't have been freaking out about this test but if you were me you'd be freaking out since I never study!This test was making me have a nervous breakdown.
"Well i'm going home, Blaise.I got to..."I took a big gulp and said it"Study."
I ran home as fast as I could.I tripped on a rock and got sprayed by sprinklers, No thanks to the nervous breakdown because of the test.I opened my door, wet, and bruised on my left arm
"Ah, what happened to you son?"My mother said worried.
"Nothing, mom.I was just in a hurry to do something"I responded.
I opened the door to my room and quickly closed it.I got out a piece of paper from my backpack and started studying.A few hours later I took a shower and went to sleep
The next day, my head started to hurt massively, I thought it was because I studied since I never really did.I went to eat breakfast near my mom when I heard a voice, exactly like my mom's saying"Maybe I should tell him, now"
I looked around and said to my mom
"Did you say something mom, cause I think I heard your voice."
"No, I only thought something"My mom said
"Wait?!Are you saying I read your mind?"
"Yes and I think I should tell you the truth about our family"
I was getting a bit worried, I don't know why tough.I just listened to my mom saying lots of things about our family and how they had powers and each of their son or daughter had powers.My mom also said we have telekinesis and I was very intrigued by all of this.
So the test was today and I walked to school, very calm and mellow.Blaise walked up to me and said
"Well, well I thought you'd come to school really nervous or not come to school at all cause of the test!"
"Don't worry Blaise, I got it all under control"I said with a smirk on my face.
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O_O Fiction I hope. xD Jk.
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Nice story!
 I lieked it alooott,[LoL] "The next day, my head started to hurt massively, I thought it was because I studied since I never really did" [/LoL] I cram when it comes ta testz :P Now i wonder wats Johns gonna do next....  |
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It should be very easy to figure out what he'll do next :P
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Eh...it was ok, but the puncuation mistakes detracted from the story a lot.
SO, what are your powers? |
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~psst!~ I think he's gonna tell ya in the next one!
It makes you wonder more what he'll do :P |
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Eh...it was ok, but the puncuation mistakes detracted from the story a lot.
SO, what are your powers? Telekinesis which lets me read minds, control objects or people and teleport. |
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Sorry I'm not really good when it comes to punctuation and stuff =/
Telekinesis which lets me read minds, control objects or people and teleport.  |
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Sounds good so far. Not much of a cliffhanger though.
Kidding. |
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