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carlosjfer
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04-29-2009, 06:56 PM
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A couple things I gotta say:
Well, first, never give away the whole story. Just the basics. Also, dont be vague like: "the gamplay is like many others" or "the graphics are better" be specific. Include other sections such as wifi/multiplayer, sound/music, and uses of wiimote/controls. Stay a bit more on topic too... If it your first review, then its ok, but Im sure you can improve with practice |
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Shade
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04-29-2009, 09:11 PM
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This review could use a bit of work...
1. Images/Videos. A visual aid to help explain what message you are trying to send never hurts. Be sure to have a heading for each image/video so the reader understands what you have inserted into the review. A good example would be placing a video of someone using Wii Speak on Wi-Fi in the beginning of the Wii Speak section of your review. 2. Quality. Every game has a flaw in each area that you choose to review. I saw nothing but positives when I read the review. Also, there wasn't enough information in each section. Have a nice introduction sentence, at least 3 details to go along with the topic, and then a nice closing sentence. 3. Don't leave spoilers out in the open. That's what the [SPOILER][/ SPOILER] tags are for. For example, that story paragraph should've been spoilered. Don't forget to put the title of the paragraph outside the spoiler sothevreader knows what to expect. 4. Information. I want to know more about the game. There is so much you can talk about for an Animal Crossing game. You barely touched the surface. Some sections that you could cover are: Sounds, Music, Controls, Gameplay, Wi-Fi, Value (was the game worth it?), Replay Value (once you complete the game, how likely are you to pick the game back up?), Comparison to Previous Games in the Animal Crossing Series, etc. If this is your first/second review, good effort. I like that. If you need assistance with a review, don't hesitate to ask the Review Team for guidance. |
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Fame
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04-30-2009, 01:35 PM
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Kayla.Corpse
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11-02-2009, 07:30 PM
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eesh
:S dont mean to be mean , but that review was full of run on sentence after run on sentence :S very hard to read but I will be buying this game fer sure ^_^ sounds very cool |
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vVv Rapture
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11-03-2009, 10:32 AM
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Everyone beat me to the punch. Not a very good review. Everyone covered everything I was going to say.
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leezy97
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11-04-2009, 02:59 AM
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Hm, there's a few areas you could touch up on. There is only 1 picture and no videos. We like to see at least 3 or 4 pictures and 1 or 2 videos. There is not enough information and the information that's there isn't very high quality. Try to add a balance of negativity and positivity and a balance of opinion and fact. Spelling should be checked over. I do like how you put subtitles on the different sections. Overall, a pretty average review. Good luck in the future. |
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