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| Graphics | | 1 |
| Sound | | 1 |
| Replay value | | 1 |
| Value | | 1 |
| Multiplayer (Wifi) | N/A |
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solid graphics. this game's graphics blend in very well, the camera ALWAYS focuses on you ship. also the graphics are kinda lego style they couldv done better, but not by much, although it scores an 8, i was expcting something a bit more flashy because of the techno music
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1-Keep on topic: Graphics are not about how they blend, focuses on your ship or the flashy techno music, It's about the quality, how realistic or how cartoon like, It's abou the over all impression. keep in mind that whe you change the subject that is titled with another you lose the flow of your review and the reader is lost, so thats a no do.
2-Punctuation: Always keep a watch for punctuation, you obviously didnt give attention to it, make sure you slip after each paragraph, and Capitalize the letters in the beginning of sentences, also watch for excessive commas and Cap's. Do not use chat abbreviations within your review what so ever.
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it's soft techno. didn't really like it much. but would like some paper mario style techno (hard techno), as i was saying before, the sound blends in but not at its best. the blending gets an 8/10. but shooting and other sound effects did sound great. anyway, if you didn't like one track you could change it
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3-You must be a little bit tougher in Rating, an 8/10 just for the blending is kind of extremely generous, at least state more reason on why you gave it a generous eight, tell us if you like it or not, If it's makes any suspense/interest etc.
4-Punctuation.
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the major feature of this game is the editor, you can design you own bullets, backround, ships, enemy ships, and levels, but the editors learning curve is high. there are some elements of google scetchup tho. the company made levels are rather boring. the user levels ROCK! since it is a customizing game, customizing difficulty.
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5-Details: Put more details into it, give us and obvious impression of yours, it is lacking the explanation of how to play the game, personally I don't am not really familiar with the game and so I got lost, you were saying things about the game play, but the reader doesn't have the slightest idea about how th game play goes, Here is the perfect place to place a game play video however you still have to explain more to it.
6-Flow: You are suddenly telling us about the major feature of the game when you are titling the paragraph as game play, give us the main idea then go into further details.
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you are able to send creations to friend or a website called Blastworksdepot if you send something to the depot, anybody can acess it and download it to their game
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7-Details.
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i haven't played it yet, but it does look funner than single player.
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8-Do not make a paragraph then go Mr.wonders about it, either make it and detail it, or don't make at all, Telling us how it looks or seems doesn't help.
[quote] THE BAD high learning curve
WHY SHOULD I BUY THIS GAME
editor can do as much as google scetchup/ infinite posibilities
get more than your money's worth
great control
boss fights are hard but solid
good for 10+
easy control[/quote]
9-Try to make a final thoughts paragraph and add these to it, however try to roll a few details.
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Over all tips:
1-Try to format it a bit and make it neater, maybe also center it and dress it with some colors, Underline and bold the titles.
2-Work on details, your missing loads of details from what I saw on the video. Try explaining your sensation or your experience of playing this game, that would be quite a decent addition.
3-Add the picture of the front cover in the beginning of your review, as well as a little 2-4 introduction would do. Also add in-game pictures.
4-Spice it up with some vocabulary and decent phrases, they will add a great appeal to your review in whole.
5-Sounds, graphics, replay value value and multi-player are ratings, The review is mainly about the story line, game play, intro an props and cons. and finally the game controls.
That's about it,you can contact me for any further questions, hope it all did you well.
Super Brick
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I know I should not be doing this, but I know it will be your lesson for life, Ill show you how it would have looked If you formated it a bit. Of course it is best to have your own style in formatting >your< review, I'm just doing this as a lesson.
P.S I only did the Caps and the Spelling with a little bit of coloring and formatting. Minor changes, big difference. (4 minutes job)
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Blast Works Review
TYPE
This game is a custom build shoot em' up
Graphics
Solid graphics, This game's graphics blend in very well, the camera always focuses on your ship. Also the graphics are kind Lego style they could’ve done better, but not by much, although it scores an 8, I was expecting something a bit more flashy because of the techno music.
Sounds
It's soft techno, Didn’t really like it much. But would like some paper Mario style techno (hard techno), as I was saying before, the sound blends in but not at its best. The blending gets an 8/10. But shooting and other sound effects did sound great. Anyway, if you didn't like one track you could change it.
Game play
The major feature of this game is the editor, you can design you own bullets, background, ships, enemy ships, and levels, but the editor’s learning curve is high. There are some elements of google scetchup though. The company made levels are rather boring. The user levels ROCK! Since it is a customizing game, customizing difficulty.
Wi-Fi
You are able to send creations to friend or a website called Blastworksdepot if you send something to the depot, anybody can access it and download it to their game.
Multi Player
I haven't played it yet, but it does look more fun than single player.
Memory Size
each creation folder takes up 128 blocks on your Wii. you can transfer it to your SD card.
The Bad
high learning curve
Why should you buy this game?
- Editor can do as much as Google scetchup/ infinite possibilities.
- Get more than your money's worth.
- Boss fights are hard but solid.
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