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Published by DaWn
10-20-2009 |
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Ace
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10-21-2009, 12:03 AM
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Nice review for your first try.
Id like to see some more details though for each section. More details will prolly make it eye catching and wanted. Nice pics. Id like to see a vid maybe. Nice that the positivity and negativity are balanced with more detail than personal opinion. It makes me want this game more. Phanpy look very cute that pic with chimchar. Cant wait to play this game when it comes out. Ill rioulu and my partner will prolly be mudkip; Gliscor being my third team member later on. <3 Ground types in the games(HINT: Earthquake. Affects the whole floor your on). |
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vVv Rapture
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10-21-2009, 04:16 AM
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Definitely needs a lot of work.
First, how you organized the review was extremely odd. The different colors was a quick turn-off and the beginning of the review lacked boxart and just had a stray introduction paragraph randomly put there without any hesitation. All of the sections could have been extremely expanded on, especially when you said the story is a continuation of the first two. The whole point of the review is for the reader to learn about the game and your opinion on it. It isn't a good job by the reviewer if you don't explain things. Your wording in certain areas was just awkward and not effective at all, especially the first paragraph, which was ridden with grammatical errors and just poorly put together. Videos are unnecessary since they pull you away from the review. Just use pictures. It is sort of pointless to provide videos when screenshots get your point across much better. Additionally, this is your review. Your opinion. Don't refer to an opinion as other people. Also, don't contradict yourself, like for example: "It is pretty good but it could be a little bit better, but no one is complaining." That's just not even necessary. Stick with an opinion and go for it. You need a lot of work, but it was a good try. Keep practicing and you'll do better. |
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nelo
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10-21-2009, 05:31 AM
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okay review but i guess it's hard to right a review for a basic expansion pack
i didn't like the game i thought that there wasn't enough content but in i loved explorers of time/darkness the first time i played it this game just felt like a really short expansion pack to me good try on the review a few more pictures and maybe a couple better descriptions |
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spencerjj2
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10-27-2009, 07:56 PM
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You did a good job, but you could've mentioned the gameplay and how it was set up. If I had never played a pokemon mystery dungeon game I wouldn't now how the actual gameplay was played out.
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leezy97
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11-04-2009, 02:48 AM
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Pretty good review. Could use a bit of work on the information, but I liked the way you set it out and the pictures were good. I also like how you used a colour scheme. Good job. |
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