Jackit & Friends

[Fyree the Spirit God]

thats probably my favorite one!!!
Wiimote meets crotch....OW!

[King of Boos]

POW right in the kisser! lol

[Fyree the Spirit God]

maybe you should rename it:
"Jackit's Attempted Adventures"

[Jackitkong]

Originally Posted by Fyree the Spirit God maybe you should rename it: "Jackit's Attempted Adventures"

I don't know 'bout that.... Attempted applies that they failed but that isn't 100% the case especailly later on when I actually come up with an "adventure". But that's on the right track... I'm now thinking titles like Jackit Tales, Jackit Fun Time, or even Jackit and Friends.... Of course I'll keep it Jackit Adventures until I deside.

(In case you haven't been able to tell yet, I'm really trying to go professional now. At least as professional as web comics get around here.)
I'm just about ready for crossovers, Pocketin. Can you wait for me to get a head start before you start doing my crossover, since my process I think takes a little longer.

[Pocketim]

Originally Posted by Jackitkong I don't know 'bout that.... Attempted applies that they failed but that isn't 100% the case especailly later on when I actually come up with an "adventure". But that's on the right track... I'm now thinking titles like Jackit Tales, Jackit Fun Time, or even Jackit and Friends.... Of course I'll keep it Jackit Adventures until I deside. (In case you haven't been able to tell yet, I'm really trying to go professional now. At least as professional as web comics get around here.) I'm just about ready for crossovers, Pocketin. Can you wait for me to get a head start before you start doing my crossover, since my process I think takes a little longer.

Sure, you may want to practice drawing my characters first though...

[Solphins]

Originally Posted by Fyree the Spirit God maybe you should rename it: "Jackit's Attempted Adventures"

No man it should be "Jackit... well not anymore after that hit."

[Fyree the Spirit God]

Originally Posted by Solphins No man it should be "Jackit... well not anymore after that hit."

LOL...seriously...
or "Jackit's Emergency"

[madbz9]

It wasn't bad this comic, yet it felt just like not funny. It feels too serious, too tense. I don't know what it is about the comic. I'm not saying it's bad, the pictures are a little above par... I mean when you worked up the punchline you just have to know it will make you laugh. That's what most of the best comedians do these day. Work up the punchline and then bam hit you with it.

I just think that your punchline and drawings need to be worked on... They are a good start. Nice job so, far... Keep at it. I got Ideas if you want I'm somewhat funny. Helped HellasicXD With some tips.... Well I think you can get better...

[Edit] About the name... Misadventures sounds good, but it's a little cliche ya think? Maybe something like... Jackit's Mishap Adventures... Or something in that region I'll ponder on it if I get the time...

[Jackitkong]

Originally Posted by madbz9 It wasn't bad this comic, yet it felt just like not funny. It feels too serious, too tense. I don't know what it is about the comic. I'm not saying it's bad, the pictures are a little above par... I mean when you worked up the punchline you just have to know it will make you laugh. That's what most of the best comedians do these day. Work up the punchline and then bam hit you with it. I just think that your punchline and drawings need to be worked on... They are a good start. Nice job so, far... Keep at it. I got Ideas if you want I'm somewhat funny. Helped HellasicXD With some tips.... Well I think you can get better...

To Bolded part: Well I am in the middle of a drawing transition right now anyways. I think I got one more that I already colored in pencil but the next one I plan to show, I didn't color in at all until I got on to Gimp. So I would wait until then to really judge my my artist ablities.

To Red part: Well I appriate your honesty, I thought my latest one did a great job in building up supense but... maybe I gave too much foreshadowing in that one. To be honest I only see myself getting better with the jokes every day when one of the comics I draw get "sliped" out to friends and family usally they are laughing. I think my problem may be that they don't focus enough on video games cause that's what everyone on here understands. However I don't see that completly stopping, cause I lately just draw about whatever comes to my attention. But I think I'm planing on drawing some more comics that "guest star" video game characters. I even have a little banner idea planed out to introduce the "guest chracters" whenever there is one in one of my comics.

To yellow: Well to be honest I got so many ideas myself right now that I can barley even keep track of all of them. But I remember your offer if I ever need it.

Thanks for all the feedback.

Originally Posted by Jackit Umm.. guys I think we all know as much as those shots hurt it's never anything permit. I've already made a full recover from my err... lets say, "Wii Sports insident" It would have taken that long but I just had to overreact and fall right on my back on the floor. Gees... you would think we would have carpeting for that basement by now. LOL However I plan to let Sara have the spotlight in the next comic, just letting you know that it has nothing to do with any sort of injury.....

[Pocketim]

Originally Posted by Jackitkong To Bolded part: Well I am in the middle of a drawing transition right now anyways. I think I got one more that I already colored in pencil but the next one I plan to show, I didn't color in at all until I got on to Gimp. So I would wait until then to really judge my my artist ablities. To Red part: Well I appriate your honesty, I thought my latest one did a great job in building up supense but... maybe I gave too much foreshadowing in that one. To be honest I only see myself getting better with the jokes every day when one of the comics I draw get "sliped" out to friends and family usally they are laughing. I think my problem may be that they don't focus enough on video games cause that's what everyone on here understands. However I don't see that completly stopping, cause I lately just draw about whatever comes to my attention. But I think I'm planing on drawing some more comics that "guest star" video game characters. I even have a little banner idea planed out to introduce the "guest chracters" whenever there is one in one of my comics. To yellow: Well to be honest I got so many ideas myself right now that I can barley even keep track of all of them. But I remember your offer if I ever need it. Thanks for all the feedback.

The comics don't have to be about Video Games, mine aren't and people still find them funny, for example...

Quote: Bwing: Its Maxi-Me the Search & Rescue Recruit! Pocketim: Hoo-ray...

That was my favorite part of that comic

[Jackitkong]

Alright folks here is the first 0% color pencils involved Jackit Adventures Comic.

Meet Joe
(click on link to see comic)

I'm not going lie to you have have just one more color pencile comic lieing around that I gotta use but after that this will be the new style....for the most part.

[Pocketim]

Originally Posted by Jackitkong Alright folks here is the first 0% color pencils involved Jackit Adventures Comic. Meet Joe (click on link to see comic) I'm not going lie to you have have just one more color pencile comic lieing around that I gotta use but after that this will be the new style....for the most part.

Nice fire effect, It looks better that way