Summer Creative Contest #2 - Summer Poetry - Page 2 - NintendoPals.net Nintendo Friend Codes Forum

Crazy · 07-16-2009, 07:49 PM

Alrighty here's mine. It's short but sweet

Summer

Warm, vibrant, heat flows,
into teasing clouds and skies...
a seagull flies by...

The Steevo · 07-17-2009, 12:31 AM

You Knew I was going to enter shade

Summer In The Desert

By Steevo Weevo (Steven Ramirez)

I am Living in the Desert
Where there is nice and warm sand
It is Humid in the Desert
But you can wipe sweat off with your hand

People Run to Swim in a pool
Because it brings laughs and Joy
It helps them stay cool
For people to enjoy

Running barefooted to catch the ice cream truck
Will make your feet Burn
Which means your out of luck
So when your in the desert heat, make sure you learn

Beat the heat and you will always have fun

leezy97 · 07-17-2009, 12:37 AM

Originally Posted by Steevo Weevo

You Knew I was going to enter shade

Summer In The Desert

By Steevo Weevo (Steven Ramirez)

I am Living in the Desert
Where there is nice and warm sand
It is Humid in the Desert
But you can wipe sweat off with your hand

People Run to Swim in a pool
Because it brings laughs and Joy
It helps them stay cool
For people to enjoy

Running barefooted to catch the ice cream truck
Will make your feet Burn
Burning too long makes mean people say $%@#
So when your in the desert heat, make sure you learn

Beat the heat and you will always have fun

I do believe that one of the rules was "Foul language/content is NOT allowed. Any poem containing foul language will be deleted."

Crazy · 07-17-2009, 01:53 PM

Well he didn't really swear he just put &%&&# so...

Fame · 07-17-2009, 01:54 PM

Originally Posted by Shade

[*]Foul language/content is NOT allowed. Any poem containing foul language will be deleted.

Yeah its in the rules.

leezy97 · 07-17-2009, 06:10 PM

Originally Posted by Crazy

Well he didn't really swear he just put &%&&# so...

But it is still swearing, whether or not he covered it up with $%@# or not. And Fame has agreed, so sorry Steevo Weevo. Unless you change it to something else, your entry will be disqualified.

The Steevo · 07-17-2009, 10:37 PM

well i guess that would be considered as a swear. ill change it right away

Edit: Shade I changed it but will it be disqualified anyways or is it still in?

Fame · 07-18-2009, 12:16 PM

Originally Posted by Steevo Weevo

well i guess that would be considered as a swear. ill change it right away

Edit: Shade I changed it but will it be disqualified anyways or is it still in?

Mike says your fine. Your still in.

Shade · 07-18-2009, 09:57 PM

This contest's voting period has officially ended!

A Voting thread will come up soon!


07-16-2009, 07:49 PM	#13 (permalink)
Crazy Smexy Canada Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 1,054 Total Awards: 8 Friend Codes	Alrighty here's mine. It's short but sweet Summer Warm, vibrant, heat flows, into teasing clouds and skies... a seagull flies by... __________________ Add me on The Conduit Wifi- 3481 1068 3739


07-17-2009, 12:31 AM	#14 (permalink)
The Steevo Welcome to Steevo-Town Y-City Arizona Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Y-City Arizona Posts: 1,142 Total Awards: 6 Friend Codes	You Knew I was going to enter shade Summer In The Desert By Steevo Weevo (Steven Ramirez) I am Living in the Desert Where there is nice and warm sand It is Humid in the Desert But you can wipe sweat off with your hand People Run to Swim in a pool Because it brings laughs and Joy It helps them stay cool For people to enjoy Running barefooted to catch the ice cream truck Will make your feet Burn Which means your out of luck So when your in the desert heat, make sure you learn Beat the heat and you will always have fun __________________ 2:56 PM [NoJ] pokemenz is serious 2:56 PM [Alsabino] my mommy is serious 2:56 PM [YankeeFan802] ^ Last edited by The Steevo; 07-17-2009 at 10:41 PM.


07-17-2009, 01:53 PM	#16 (permalink)
Crazy Smexy Canada Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 1,054 Total Awards: 8 Friend Codes	Well he didn't really swear he just put &%&&# so... __________________ Add me on The Conduit Wifi- 3481 1068 3739


07-17-2009, 10:37 PM	#19 (permalink)
The Steevo Welcome to Steevo-Town Y-City Arizona Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Y-City Arizona Posts: 1,142 Total Awards: 6 Friend Codes	well i guess that would be considered as a swear. ill change it right away Edit: Shade I changed it but will it be disqualified anyways or is it still in? __________________ 2:56 PM [NoJ] pokemenz is serious 2:56 PM [Alsabino] my mommy is serious 2:56 PM [YankeeFan802] ^ Last edited by The Steevo; 07-17-2009 at 11:09 PM.